Bunny

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October 17, 2008



Mr. Julio M. Basanez, Manager
La Palmora Restaurant
24 Saint Louise St
Baton Rouge, LA 77802-3615

Dear Julio,

Your piquant black bean soup drew me back to the LA Paloma yesterday. We were taken primarily to our table, but we waited over ten minutes before menus were presented.

Several times I provided clues to the server that I was hosting the luncheon. Without noting these clues or asking who should receive the check, the server gave it to the man across from me. Had the check been placed upside down in the middle of the table my client wouldn’t have been “put on the spot”.

Several times a week someone from my company entertains clients at La Paloma Restaurant. Will you talk to your staff about greeting diners promptly and handling checks properly? But please Julio, don’t disturb the chef!

Cordially



Miss Jade Elizabeth, President

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The above was a Business Essentials assignment, We had to copy the letter from somewhere she got it, therefore it is not mine but I do not believe it was copyrighted. If it is I will gladly remove it :).

 

Runic

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all business letters vary depending on organisational styling, always check on how a business that you work with lays out there letters, also please note the town should always be written in capitals.

 

Bunny

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It should? I was never taught that :S.

 

Runic

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yeh it should well here anyway thats the default style (member I trained in business)

 

Bunny

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Hmm. Must be a European thing cause I wasnt taught that :S.

 



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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

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Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

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