Runic

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Well as most people know I love my black and death emtal, here is a song i just wrote.


Snow White Funeral
by Bryan Deakin

Knowing everything, looking inside
thinking what's against my morals
A new creature controls my mind,
She's my heart and soul,  but cold inside

Knowing what the future doth hold,
The feeling grows
A smile full of hate, I lied
The slut has decided her fate

Looking through, my tired eyes
My heart being torn apart
Now that my hearing is gone
Last ounce of lies cannot be heard

I've grown tired of passion
Not even passion of love or of death
I'm driven by the anger
With the thought of her deceitful words

I see the fucking slut
In my broken heart
She's wishing for her death
For snow white funeral

A naked flame causes the ruin
She now lays in a pool of blood
The snow is falling, the bitch is dead
Time to celebrate, the death

I hear the sirens in the distance
Questions they do ask,
Ready to take them out in style.

© 2009, Bryan Deakin

 

 

Bunny

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Love it!

(I read it on MSN mwahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaa)

 

Runic

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I like it :) but thanks Bunny

 

Lunar

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Your poem is so violent :|
I'm scared, but I like it

 

Runic

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ITS NOT A FECKIN POEM!!!!

 

Lunar

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I realise this now...
Violent much? :'(

 

Runic

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3 massive things show its not

1. I have stated
2. its in lyrics
3. you seen this on msn and i said same to you

 

Lunar

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hmmm... SHH! 8-)

 

Runic

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:P

1-0 :D

 

MissTickle

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snow white is a slut?

 

Runic

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maybe so with all those guys and we can tell what one she liked best *cough* sleepy *cough* but this is more about the color or idiom snow white and not the Walt Disney character.  Also careful my niece reads this site as guest and shes only 6 lets not tell her that her favorite princess sleeps with many people.

 

Raivyn

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Whoa, I enjoyed reading this a lot! Thanks for sharing

 



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Bryan Deakin (Runic) is a Poet who has made 1001 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 07:04am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Runic was invited by Bunny.

About Runic
So I am a 31 yr old Poet/Singer/Actor.  From Scotland but due to job travel 7 months a year.  Lover of all things Finnish and Greek.

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Love, Gothic, Satire, Humor, Life, Deah, Suicide

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