akasha24

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Here are the lyrics to a song of mine :) Enjoy!

Never loved anyone(the way that I Iove you)


I don't think that I've ever been this close to you.
I never thought we'd do all of the things we do.
And I have to pinch myself each time you kiss me.
And I have to knock on wood each time you're with me.

This is a miracle, I've waited so long.
I know this is meant to be, 'cos when you're with me,
we can't go wrong.

So just stay with me, hold me close.
What you give to me, is all I need to feel.
Take me in your arms and don't let me go.
I want you to know that I've never loved anyone
the way that I love you.

I don't think that we've ever touched each other like this.
When I look into your eyes, it tells me everything.
When we make love, I feel your heart beating next to mine.
The way you kiss me, slows down time.

This is a miracle, I've waited so long.
I know this is meant to be, 'cos when you're with me,
we can't go wrong.

So just stay with me, hold me close.
What you give to me, is all I need to feel.
Take me in your arms and don't let me go.
I want you to know that I've never loved anyone
the way that I love you.

 

KittyK

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That's really beautiful, and heartfelt.  I could feel the emotion really building right from the start, and when I got to:

"I don't think that we've ever touched each other like this.
When I look into your eyes, it tells me everything.
When we make love, I feel your heart beating next to mine.
The way you kiss me, slows down time."

I felt the rawness of the emotion, the vulnerability, and the joy that quickly took over in the next verse:

"This is a miracle, I've waited so long....."

Ah, love is such a roller-coaster of emotion. 

I really like it  :)

 

akasha24

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Thank you :) I am really glad you liked it. I think it's fair to say that it is one of my most honest songs. Yes, love is a roller coaster and isn't it funny how there's that one person who can't forget, that one person you are able to fall head over heals for over and over again.

 

KittyK

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Thank you :) I am really glad you liked it. I think it's fair to say that it is one of my most honest songs. Yes, love is a roller coaster and isn't it funny how there's that one person who can't forget, that one person you are able to fall head over heals for over and over again.

I know that feeling well!! It's amazing how much creativity is borne out of the painful state of being in love, and everything that comes with it.  I think you captured it very well in your song. 

Good luck with it.  :)

 

akasha24

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Yes, it is really interesting how much love can actually hurt, but the only good thing that comes out of the pain, is poetry and song. This is the only reason I love love itself, even if it's painful because I am able to create a masterpiece. :)

 



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