Still here

Series: Akasha Lyrics

 

akasha24

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Here are the lyrics to a song I wrote a couple of weeks ago called "Still Here"! :)


Still Here
You're the one I can't escape.
Without your heart, mine will break.
I know I sold my soul to you.

Without your smile all I do is cry.
Without your kiss my lips run dry.
Even though you're not next to me I feel...

You're still here.
You're still here.

The darkness comes, I hear your voice.
When I lay in my bed, I feel your touch.
Even though you're not holding me I feel...

You're still here.
You're still here.

No matter where I turn, your eyes are all I see.
No matter who I'm with, your love is haunting me.
Even though you're not next to me I feel...

You're still here.
You're still here.

You're still here.
You're still here.

 

Kimberley

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It might be the fact that I'm watching supernatural right now on the TV....but this poem really creeped me out! At first it was sweet and then it took on a sort of demonic turn! Wow I am sure it wasn't meant to be read the way I just read it!  :O

I still really like it, it's just while watching a show about demons and stuff it took a weird turn.

 

CharButler

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I liked it! Thought it was well written. Would be interested to hear it to some music, how it would sound. Only suggestion would be maybe adding a little more to the chorus. The versus were well done :)

 



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