akasha24

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Keep on lovin' You

I still hear your voice whenever the wind blows.
I still see your face whenever I close my eyes.
Even though it's been years since we talked, you
still cross my mind.

Though you hurt me, left me all alone. You lied to
my face, I still hold on. I don't know why...

I don't know why I still fall for your smile, get
captured by your eyes. Tell me why I need you,
when I know that you're no good but no matter what
you do, I keep on lovin' you.

I remember back when you loved me like you'll never
see me again. Back then we trusted, didn't hurt each other.
You were my best friend, now you don't care.

I don't know why I still fall for your smile, get
captured by your eyes. Tell me why I need you,
when I know that you're no good but no matter what
you do, I keep on lovin' you.

Tell me why I can't let you go? Why can't I move on?

 I don't know why I still fall for your smile, get
captured by your eyes. Tell me why I need you,
when I know that you're no good but no matter what
you do, I keep on lovin' you.

Written by Christina "Akasha" Curtis

 

CharButler

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I may be becoming a fan of your work! lol
I would love to hear these lyrics put to music, I know it would be really powerful. Great job once again :)

 

akasha24

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

I actually have composed the music as well. All I would need to do is record it in a proper studio and have musicians play the music and I would sing the song. I plan on doing that some time soon.

 

CharButler

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I've attempted to record a couple things with just a mic from my PC. It  certainly isn't great quality but sometimes it is just fun to do it :) lol. Talent or not haha. :) I did enjoy your lyrics tho and if you do record it post it so we can all hear!

 

tasha

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Thats great and a talent for writing lyrics is not easy to get! You should send your lyrics in along with the music to people who are looking for songs. Artists often post for writers and you would be great for it.

 

Raina_johns

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This is true definition of talent . I almost started crying thinking about my past relationship . Good job .

 



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