Djeinus

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...I couldn't find a proper title. I still consider this a work in progress. I wrote this on a coffee break at work.

I'm alone, all by myself
on this day of Valentine.
It reminds me of my solitude
but yet I feel just fine
'cause my freedom is untouched
and I do not really care
for all the romance
they seem to like to share.

And never in my life
have I ever felt alone.
I'm enough for my own company,
though that's not set in stone,
for if the right one would by chance
barge right in through the door
I wouldn't hesitate
to throw my heart
right there on the floor.

It has caused a lot of worry
among my family and friends
and their inquiries on my love life
seem to never take it's end,
but in the end it doesn't matter,
I am still my very own.
So, I'll keep on
going my way;
I'd rather stay alone.

 

 

Bunny

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That's actually pretty cool! It's not a downer type of song, it's positive and strong. I like the way you see things :D.

It would be good if others felt the same, and I get what you mean about family but I think sometimes they just want some gossip ha ha.

 

Bunny

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ALSO (cause I can't edit right now ha ha) the heart on the floor part was pretty epic. I loved the imagery of some crazy woman running into a bar and you throwing your heart on the floor then you guys totally making out in some firey aggressive love scene ha ha.

 

Djeinus

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ALSO (cause I can't edit right now ha ha) the heart on the floor part was pretty epic. I loved the imagery of some crazy woman running into a bar and you throwing your heart on the floor then you guys totally making out in some firey aggressive love scene ha ha.
Oh my god, this... is beautiful. Now I just have to keep a heart in my pocket, just in case.

 

Bunny

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Ha ha the butchers sell them very cheap! :D

 

Djeinus

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Oh, I was thinking more about a few friends I could do well without...

 

Bunny

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LOL I quote myself: when you burn the forest, new and better trees grow in its ashes.

 

Djeinus

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Well, at least I won't run out of hearts then.

 

Bunny

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LOL I laughed so hard I inhaled bread. BREAD, Djeinus!!! BREAD!!!


Actually it was cinnamon and sugar cause I was eating a doughnut. Regardless, the trauma from your dark humour is still there :P.

<3

 

Kimberley

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You're pretty darn awesome Djenius.

 

Djeinus

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You're pretty darn awesome Djenius.
I-I am?


(P.S. This means thank you)

 

Raivyn

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This is pretty awesome. Well worded and an enjoyable read.

 



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Djeinus (Djeinus) is a Just Creative who has made 228 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 11:45pm Sat, Dec 31, 2011. Djeinus was invited by advertisement.

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