Addicted to Love

Series: Addicted To Love

 

Simone D

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I wished he would just hold me in his arms, Kiss my forehead and say I love you. I will always love you and I need you. I can't imagine my life without you. You make me so happy. You are my best friend,the woman I want to spend my life loving eternally. You make me smile, you make me laugh and you are so beautiful, strong and amazing.
I wished he would tell me it's okay to let go, okay to trust him and let him in forever because he would always be there for me. He would be the man who never tired of my inner nerd, my anal retentive cleanliness and order, or over ambitious aspirations. He would smile a sexy half smile and even as his eyes crinkled with aged years of loving me, I would feel comforted and embraced with such an innate feeling in my heart that my life was exactly as it should be.

That was my fantasy.
The reality was that I would become so consumed in this idea that I'd lose him and myself in it so deeply that he would believe it all as much as me. Just as he became this man, I would already be enticed on to the next best fantasy for fear that the past was all just that, since I could never trust him...not really.

The new fantasy would then be escalated to something even more thrilling, more dangerous.
The passion would be fueled by a hungrier fury. This would not be receiving of anything beyond the scales of pure rushing adrenaline.
The new pleasures of my soul of the day would be in the form of a mysterious, dark lover who would
not be so sappy. This lover would be intriguing and make me work to probe through his rough exterior.
I would open him and make him susceptible to my charms. He would give in over time and it would be just enough for him to see the glimmer of me i allowed. I would so perfectly enchant him that his walls would recede simultaneously. His years of negativity and distrust would shed from his consciousness. I would sprout roots through his heart and he would believe in new possibilities.
On the course of his yearning to express his content, I would be ravished.
A symphony of lustful rendezvous would ensue to heighten my arousal just in time to leave me wanting more than this one would now ever possibly be fit to sate.

Now even this dream too shall perish and incline a new lover of ages.

 

 

Sofieb529

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I like the lyric -" I would open him and make him susceptible to my charms"--so cool!

 

Bunny

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I want to hear this sung.

 

akasha24

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Wow! I really enjoyed reading that. It's so beautiful and well written. I can totally relate to every word. I am kind of in the same situation, so it's great to know I 'm not alone with my feelings. Good work! :)

 

Lovetroops.com

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Nice lyrics! :)

 

Simone D

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wow it has been awhile since I logged in because I couldn't remember which email was associated with this account. None the less I have recovered it and would just like to say thank you ladies for your replies and compliments! It is always nice to know that I am able to write relatable material.

 

tasha

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I love reading other peoples lyrics as to interpret is probably not the same as what you would think it is but for the person listening it does get through to them and they can relate in some way in their own lives. That is the art of great lyrical writers to interpret the words and let the listener read into it. Well done

 

oraclemay

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Yes, I have to agree, well done. You do write beautifully. It has been a long time for me to be able to relate to something like this. It brings back memories.

 

Simone D

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Wow thanks so much for your feedback! It's very inspiring to hear such compliments on my writing! The part I love most is that I can evoke some response in my readers on a deeper level, so thanks so much! 😊

 



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