Bunny

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How this will help: It can help get creative juices flowing, and maybe even give you ideas for stories or plots!

We're making a love story one sentence at a time! Be sure to read the whole story before you contribute so you know what's happening, and please allow other people to post before you post again. At least one other person needs to post after you before you can contribute again unless there has been no reply for 5 days.

PLEASE USE CORRECT PUNCTUATION AND CAPITALISATION LIKE IT WAS A REAL STORY! ONE SENTENCE AT A TIME!


Other Stories to participate in:
The never ending story
The never ending HORROR story
The never ending EROTIC COMEDY

 

 

Djeinus

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Janet was a lonely woman with little to no people skills.

 

Bunny

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She felt that her animal skills were above average, however, as her cats seemed to understand her as much as she understood them - which was a little too much.

 

Djeinus

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People annoyed her most of the time, just by being people.

 

Bunny

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But cats...cats were her friends.

 

Djeinus

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She didn't leave the house very often, except to go to the store for groceries.

 

Bunny

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As she did so today she found herself feeling the odd sensation of being watched.

 

Djeinus

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She couldn't shake that feeling off, although she knew it was probably something in her head.

 

Adrian Malacoda

Growing Baby Bunny

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As she returned home from the store she thought she saw someone following her, but when she turned her head there was nobody there.

 

Djeinus

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She continued down the street, listening to, watching and feeling her surroundings.

 

Bunny

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A twig snapped and she turned sharply to see a store clerk walking towards her, his eyes burning through her and making her feel on edge.

 

Djeinus

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The clerk didn't have a very memorable face. except for his unibrow.

 

Bunny

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Paralyzed in fear, the clerk approached without uttering a single sound or looking away.

 

Kimberley

Furry Young Bunny

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Suddenly able to move she hissed, turned and ran, the clerk breaking into a run behind her.

 

Bunny

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The clerk was fast, and by the time she had reached her door and dropped her keys twice he was on her step.

 

Bunny

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"Ma'am!" the clerk said, tripping over several cats as they scampered around him, "you forgot this!"

 

Djeinus

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What he was holding was a can of sardines in ketchup, which happened to be her favorite bread topping.

 

Bunny

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"I...I thought..." Janets voice trailed off as she stared at the clerks face, "I...thank you."

 

Djeinus

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She had been looking forward to eating a sardine sandwich and her night would have been absolutely ruined if she had lost her only can of sardines.

 

Bunny

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"you're welcome, ma'am" the clerk said flashing her a toothy smile.

 

Djeinus

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She rushed into the house, slamming the door on the poor clerk's face.

 

Bunny

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Her heart was racing as fast as her mind, her cats pouring in through the windows yowling.

 

Kimberley

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The following morning Janet awoke with her mind abuzz with the events of the night before.

 

Kimberley

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She had hardly slept, unable to shake the memory of being followed.

 

Bunny

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She wondered what the clerks name was, his face kept flashing across her minds eye as she wondered.

 

fibromama

Growing Baby Bunny

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She decided to visit the store that afternoon.

 

Bunny

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She woke early to doll herself up, men don't like gorilla legs after all!

 



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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

About Bunny
Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

Writing Style
Romance, Fantasy, and Sad Stories and Poems.

Other Works by this Author
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